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End of Time

Blood-eyes shutting bluntly Slicing twilight of May, Fingers numb quietly To search what's far away. Blue moments shrink on hours Within cold edge of time, This love rakes choked flowers Without need to align. The piercing of thorns does sting Where stars can never go, Questions void of meaning What moon will never know. I adored all your ages Trying to hide the shade, So that sweet exchanges Will never ever fade. But what is forever Without a vow I trace? My lips bleed and quiver Upon farewell's embrace. Rhyme Battle , Juli- Michelle 10/3/13

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Date: 10/14/2013 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Nice write...
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Date: 10/11/2013 1:56:00 PM
Very cool. Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:31:00 PM
nette, congrats with your winning poem in the rhyme battle.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2013 6:20:00 PM
Wonderful, Nette! A BIG congrats on your rhyme battle first place win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:26:00 PM
awesome rhyme battle win.............SKAT
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Date: 10/7/2013 6:27:00 PM
Nette, a poem of beautiful words. randy
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Date: 10/7/2013 9:57:00 AM
Big congratulations on this well-deserved win friend Nette :) Have a blessed days always.Hugs
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win! well done and well deserved!!
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:40:00 PM
I am always intrigued by your poetry, another excellent write...congrats on your first place win :)
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:36:00 PM
Again, your work has intrigued me. I'm not surprised to see I chose you as the winner. Great rhymes and wonderful deep meaning. So beautiful. Congratulations in my contest, thank you for sharing your poem with me. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:53:00 PM
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Date: 10/5/2013 10:06:00 AM
Beauty of passion, I feel here in this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/3/2013 10:25:00 AM
This is a very beautiful write. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 10/2/2013 11:06:00 PM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/2/2013 1:26:00 PM
The flow was beautiful, Nette...Very smooth...flowing...angelic...light...airy....beautiful! :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 10:50:00 AM
- Beautiful poem .................. memories can be forever, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 10:26:00 AM
Your voice is heard across the horizon. The depth and emotion through each stanza are so moving,so beautifully endearing.
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:34:00 AM
Just beautiful. "What is forever without the vow of grace", indeed...
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Date: 10/2/2013 7:14:00 AM
Hi Nette, A most lovely write with nice melodic flow..I liked this one from you.. Ken
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Date: 10/2/2013 6:14:00 AM
Wow! This is amazing! Such a tremendous write this is my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and ingenious poem this morning Nette! What a lovely piece, quite the astounding poem, Great Work!!
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