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SONNET – END OF LIFE

Fore'er without the pain, always apart,
As now with absent cast of yearning eyes.
Time's lonely quest to heal a wounded heart,
With destined end, to ash returns my rise.
My life ordained to doom in outcast fate,
The zeal of joy turned into woeful lies,
Confused a life in prime to dust abates
Defeats compassion past the silent cries.
From dreams of  love to useless life so bare,
Bereft attempts turned into grave desire.
No longer will remains, alone despair,
In end of all that was, of purging fire.

A lonely heart deceased in frozen cold,
No breath remains of ornament once gold.


T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/31/2016 12:16:00 AM
Rated and well deserved . . . : )
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Teppo Gren
Date: 7/31/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Indiana. T.J
Date: 5/18/2016 4:23:00 PM
Hi T.J. One always loses oneself in the deep emotions of your Sonnets. For moments you take the reader on a wonderful journey, the images stay with me for quite a while. Your words convey the sadness of Love in such a creative way. I do Love these Sonnets my friend. They are a pleasure and honour to read. This is a definite 7 and a fave.
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Date: 5/19/2016 1:01:00 AM
Once again, I thank you kindly, Mike, for your wonderful comments, seven and fave. T.J
Date: 1/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
Wonderfully done in perfect sonnet fashion, as always... you never fail to delight! Well done T.J., Keith
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Date: 1/14/2016 11:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Keith. I appreciate your visits and comments a great deal. T.J
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
...excellent illustrations too!
Date: 1/4/2016 5:53:00 PM
Excellent sonnet Teppo.
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Date: 1/4/2016 11:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nayda. T.J
Date: 1/3/2016 1:15:00 AM
This is very sad, but it is very well written. I love it. I actually want to try writing sonnets. This is a very amazing poem. -Kye :)
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Date: 1/3/2016 5:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Kyleigh. I would love to read a sonnet written by you - your poems have such depth and emotion. T.J
Date: 12/16/2015 6:52:00 PM
a very classy sonnet. It's sad but is so eloquent.
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Date: 12/17/2015 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Andrea. Much appreciated. T.J
Date: 12/16/2015 8:39:00 AM
Heart, message, flow and rhyme all superbly crafted in this great sonnet my friend! Yet again reading your sonnets , inspires me to write some sonnets this week. A7
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Date: 12/16/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. Always happy to read your comments. Cannot wait to read more of your sonnets. T.J
Date: 12/9/2015 10:39:00 AM
'No longer will remains, alone despair...' Oh my, you have the ability to express such sorrow so eloquently! Well written, went right to my heart from the start.
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your kind comments. T.J
Date: 12/9/2015 7:07:00 AM
TJ, some phrases here are wow! deep and sad esp the line with lies.. the message is wow!! the couplet made the crown shine!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Olive Eloisa. I appreciate your lovely comments. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 10:47:00 PM
The tongue turns cold when death convenes
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Date: 12/9/2015 1:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Frederic, for your continued support. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 7:29:00 PM
Your sonnets sing to me my friend. Life rises, loves, flows, glows, slows and then perishes! Great sonnet my friend! A7
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Date: 12/9/2015 12:50:00 AM
Always a pleasure to hear your comments, Robert. Thank you kindly. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 6:38:00 PM
Very chilling piece TJ.
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Date: 12/9/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tim, for visiting and reading my sonnet. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 6:04:00 PM
I agree, this is sad but well expressed.
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Date: 12/9/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. I appreciate your visit. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 2:24:00 PM
So full off sadness. That last couplet...nothing Gold remains....amazing
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eileen. I value your lovely comments. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 1:54:00 PM
It's easy to get swept into these Sonnets of yours Teppo .7... Bev
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thank you so very much for reading my sonnet and for your lovely comments. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 1:52:00 PM
The passion and heart felt emotions within your words capture your heart with their strength of truth while devastating the soul with their sadness. Emile. #7
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Date: 12/9/2015 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Emile, for your beautifully worded comments. I appreciate your encouragement. T.J
Date: 12/8/2015 1:50:00 PM
fantastic piece--brooding, lovely and deep in its tonality, TJ.. huggs
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette. It's always so lovely to rerceive and read your comments. T.J