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Enchantment

Beauty enters for sunlight to enhance To share a marble fountain where I sit Her length of hair of simple elegance In dress wind blown with its delicate split Perhaps only greeting, perhaps romance A moment of enchantment with first glance 1/29/17 contest A Rhyme in 60

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:40:00 AM
Wonderful Frederic, brings back memories.
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Date: 2/2/2017 6:58:00 PM
Love that first glance moment and love this poem, Frederic. Congrats to you.
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:12:00 PM
Frederic this is touching.....and who hasn't had those private moments of 'enchantment'. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:45:00 PM
Ooooo...I like this Frederic!!! Congratulations!!! Well done. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:37:00 AM
So full of romantic imagery... I wish you good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/29/2017 12:16:00 PM
Hi Frederic, beautiful and illusive!
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:06:00 AM
how beautiful and romantic Frederic this is most enchanting:-) hugs jan xx
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