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Empty - Tanka

a crystal vase untouched in morning light drooping lilacs again this springtime muse without grandmother's soft voice

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Date: 7/8/2019 1:58:00 PM
Hello Rick Parise, an empty vase with n water for the Lilacs. No one to care for the flower. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/31/2018 3:26:00 PM
Sweet nostalgia. A beautiful combo of elements.
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:17:00 PM
Oh I like this. Congratulations on your win. Beautiful, touched my heart.
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Date: 7/28/2018 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rick, I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.. . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2018 4:06:00 PM
So beautifully expressed, Rick. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/24/2018 3:31:00 PM
Empty for sure, good one Rick...
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