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Emptiness

The castle I built with sands of youth on shore of desire, on rhapsody of moonbeam you entered, made it a home. Ardor of our entwined hearts weaved tapestry of dreams, we fondly draped the doorway screen, our minds’ canvas. Across the sunset valley you departed on vanishing vine trail, I waited counting time at the open door, my castle crumbled. A verdant creeper you returned from my barren garden lost, embraced my emptiness on decayed chair in love’s abode ruined. September 8, 2019 Photo used : #3

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Date: 9/11/2019 3:34:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win … thank you so much for participating in my contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/9/2019 12:23:00 PM
- Nothing lasts forever ... a moving poem, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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