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Precarious vines from the tumble tree dangle Grasped by children on nerves ends Swung over dangerously high raging river Tiny ones release their grip one after another Spin and flip in spine tingly fever speed Pass sharp jagged rocks along the cliff wall drop Water down below waits for them to splash To gobble them up in the white and gray turbulence Drag them under and down stream to wonder Where the hell does this thing go to The yellow finch yawns and thinks This is too much drama for this hour It is too early to chirp and sing Little boys and girls should learn how to swim Before they take up the tumble tree swing And wake up little birds trying to sleep till spring

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Date: 2/20/2016 2:02:00 PM
Reads like a metaphor for my generation, lol! But I like that it succeeds as advice without going all fantasy and schmaltzy. I'm not sure how you arrived at the title, tho.
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 2/20/2016 2:09:00 PM
Hi Walter, Thank you so much. Children are all emotion. They jump into the unknown with unknown consequences to their actions. They are the essence of life and energy in that regard. I appreciate your comments. Earl

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