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Emerald Flies

A Butterfly Colored Dark Emerald Flies From flower to flower as they rise All the butterflies look so very wise What an image to my morning eyes Going Here I Just Kneel In my garden of beauty I will feel I am filled with your wonderful zeal Listen to the baby birds squeal Rising Sun Today Up Very Willing Orange and red fill the blue sky to the ceiling What a day filled with a warm feeling Everyday should start with this new beginning Date Write: 7/27/2021 1 Place Alpha Lines Contest Judged: 8/7/2021 Sponsored by:Joseph May

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Joseph May

Date: 8/9/2021 7:07:00 PM

Wonderful write Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/10/2021 8:58:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like my Emerald Flies write. I enjoyed writing it. Blessings going your way.................

Eve Roper

Date: 8/8/2021 2:59:00 PM

Paula, great rhyming poem. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/9/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank You, for your note, kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Emerald Flies write. Blessings going your way................

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/8/2021 3:49:00 AM

Hi Paula, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/8/2021 10:08:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Blessings going your way.................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2021 4:24:00 PM

Lovely words, Paula. I am sure this one will do well in the challene.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my early morning garden write. A beautiful day. Blessings.................

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/28/2021 2:43:00 PM

A beautiful beginning of the day you have shown. Thanks for sharing :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Yes, a beautiful day. Blessings.................

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/28/2021 2:22:00 AM

The imagery here is superb Paula. love it.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. Blessings.................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2021 12:20:00 PM

Lovely images, use of color in a serene setting of words, Paula. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for your day in the garden!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:57:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this "Emerald Flies" write. It was hard yet fun to write. Blessings.................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/27/2021 12:16:00 PM

Lovely imagery. It is a tough challenge, but you make it seem so simple. Good entry for contest. All the best

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this one. Yes, it was harder. I wrote it a few times. I hope it does well. Blessings.................

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/27/2021 9:03:00 AM

Nice write, Paula. I enjoyed your entry and wish you the best in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:53:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this write. Blessings.................

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2021 8:19:00 AM

what lovely imagery I must check out this contest asap!:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Yes, check it out. Blessings.................