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Emerald Flies

A Butterfly Colored Dark Emerald Flies    From flower to flower as they rise    All the butterflies look so very wise                            What an image to my morning eyes Going Here I Just Kneel  In my garden of beauty I will feel  I am filled with your wonderful zeal    Listen to the baby birds squeal Rising Sun Today Up Very Willing    Orange and red fill the blue sky to the ceiling  What a day filled with a warm feeling    Everyday should start with this new beginning
Date Write: 7/27/2021
1 Place
Alpha Lines  Contest Judged: 8/7/2021
 
Sponsored by:Joseph May
 

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Date: 8/9/2021 7:07:00 PM
Wonderful write Paula, Congrats on your win
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/10/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like my Emerald Flies write. I enjoyed writing it. Blessings going your way.................
Date: 8/8/2021 2:59:00 PM
Paula, great rhyming poem. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/9/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thank You, for your note, kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Emerald Flies write. Blessings going your way................
Date: 8/8/2021 3:49:00 AM
Hi Paula, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/8/2021 10:08:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Blessings going your way.................
Date: 7/28/2021 4:24:00 PM
Lovely words, Paula. I am sure this one will do well in the challene.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my early morning garden write. A beautiful day. Blessings.................
Date: 7/28/2021 2:43:00 PM
A beautiful beginning of the day you have shown. Thanks for sharing :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:00:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Yes, a beautiful day. Blessings.................
Date: 7/28/2021 2:22:00 AM
The imagery here is superb Paula. love it.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. Blessings.................
Date: 7/27/2021 12:20:00 PM
Lovely images, use of color in a serene setting of words, Paula. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for your day in the garden!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this "Emerald Flies" write. It was hard yet fun to write. Blessings.................
Date: 7/27/2021 12:16:00 PM
Lovely imagery. It is a tough challenge, but you make it seem so simple. Good entry for contest. All the best
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this one. Yes, it was harder. I wrote it a few times. I hope it does well. Blessings.................
Date: 7/27/2021 9:03:00 AM
Nice write, Paula. I enjoyed your entry and wish you the best in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:53:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this write. Blessings.................
Date: 7/27/2021 8:19:00 AM
what lovely imagery I must check out this contest asap!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Yes, check it out. Blessings.................