Embrace and Release

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No exit plan made, since none is needed Mind-body but a form, we here encase Never distanced from source, if love heeded Reins of thought, to ego not conceded We amble through life, at an easy pace No exit plan made, since none is needed Moment to moment, by conscience pleaded Childlike innocence imbibes divine grace Never distanced from source, if love heeded Mindful eye discerns fears to be weeded Detached, thus no lower desires we chase No exit plan made, since none is needed An open heart, is with bliss throb flooded Divine light radiating from the face Never distanced from source, if love heeded Oh hermit, please be not love denuded Embrace and release! Life is not a race No exit plan made, since none is needed Never distanced from source, if love heeded 05-May-2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/7/2021 9:05:00 AM

I am such a believer in this "Childlike innocence imbibes divine grace Never distanced from source, if love heeded" Bravo!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/5/2021 7:09:00 AM

Well constructed villanelle (I still can't get the hang of it.) Childlike innocence imbibes divine grace - hat seems to be the apex of what life should be.