Elusive

Your eyes are saying "Yes" today. Your lips say "No" reluctantly. My eyes and lips true love convey. Your eyes are saying "Yes" today. Confusion holds romance at bay. Will love for me bloom sweet and free? Your eyes are saying "Yes" today. Your lips say "No" reluctantly. May 21, 2021 entered in the Try a Triolet Contest placed 1st Sponsor: Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 entered in Brian Strand's All Yours (May 27) Contest Placed 1st January 18, 2022 entered in the Triolet 160 Words or Less Contest Placed 2nd Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger August 19, 2022 entered in Joseph May's Triolet Old or New Contest placed 2nd

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/25/2022 9:03:00 PM

Dear Janice, Looks like this fine Triolet has won a prize again! It is truly a fine one. Congratulations. Carol Louise

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2022 1:49:00 AM

I love the contrast of the the eyes saying yes and the lips saying no. Truth can always be seen in the eyes. A wonderful Triolet Janice. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo

Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2022 2:05:00 PM

Wonderful write Janice, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/24/2022 2:47:00 PM

Joseph, thanks for sponsoring and for my placement. Janice

Constance La France

Date: 8/24/2022 2:02:00 PM

Jancie, a wonderful Triolet and congratulations on your win in the contest ~

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/24/2022 2:47:00 PM

Thanks so much, Constance! Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2022 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Triolet write. Is it yes or is it no??? Have a blessed day..........................

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2022 5:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paula. Janice

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/8/2022 3:48:00 AM

Eyes say yes and lips say no. Wonderful. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2022 6:05:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much! Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2021 11:33:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning work. These are not so easy to write but you did a very good job with it. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/27/2021 5:55:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/25/2021 8:35:00 PM

Janice, I loved how you did your triolet! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/26/2021 6:06:00 AM

Kim, THANKS a million for sponsoring and for my placement! I am thrilled. Janice

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2021 12:18:00 PM

This poem is so unique and wonderful. It conveys the human emotions so beautifully. No wonder it is a top winner. Congratulations Janice. Blessings xxoo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/26/2021 6:09:00 AM

Thanks so much, Connie! Janice Janice

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/25/2021 10:29:00 AM

Your triolet is like a daisy - loves me, loves me not! Wonderfully done, Janice. Definitely congrats and kudos. No doubt about it!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/26/2021 6:11:00 AM

Sam, thanks a million! Janice