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Nursery Rhyme
Children's Short story (Rhyme)
Little Ellie, loves her freckles she counts them every night, her friends call her 'Ellie speckles' which fills her with delight! she traces them with her finger before she rests her head in the mirror, she lingers dallying if the truth be said, little Ellie, loves her freckles she bathes them every night, her friends call her 'Ellie speckles' which fills her with delight! this night was like no other, she froze in utter despair screaming down to her mother who came running up the stairs, little Ellie, loves her freckles she reads to them, every night her friends call her 'Ellie speckles' which fills her with delight! vanished had Ellie's freckles She had washed them off again ~ still wanting to be 'Ellie Speckles' she drew them back with a pen.

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Date: 8/15/2022 4:38:00 PM
Cute poem.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 8/16/2022 1:24:00 AM
Thank you. This poem was good fun to write.
Date: 10/2/2021 6:23:00 AM
Cute and charming! What a delight!
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 8/16/2022 1:24:00 AM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 3/31/2021 11:00:00 AM
very nice Joanna from Patrick
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/31/2021 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, for taking the time to read 'Ellies Freckles' and for leaving your comment. :-)
Date: 3/13/2021 8:30:00 PM
"she drew them, back on with a pen" :) That's one way to do it. This is cute, clever and so creative. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Joanna, on this win. I am saving this in my favorites. :) Brandy
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/14/2021 1:31:00 AM
Thank you. I hope it brings some joy. I also hope it reaches the children. :-) x
Date: 3/12/2021 6:46:00 PM
Cute Poem!
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/13/2021 12:53:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/12/2021 3:39:00 AM
- I love it ... and small ears will grow big ... and ask to read it over and over again, Joanna :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/12/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 3/11/2021 2:56:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Joanna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/11/2021 11:13:00 PM
Thank you. Xxxx
Date: 3/11/2021 1:57:00 PM
Hi Joanna, This is such a good entry. And so fitting for the age group.Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/11/2021 11:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/11/2021 1:48:00 PM
That’s wonderful Joanna, children will love it. You deserved the win ~ Belle
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/11/2021 1:53:00 PM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 3/11/2021 4:20:00 AM
Marvelous penning, Joanna:-) It's perfect for Eve's contest! Stay blessed.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/11/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 3/7/2021 12:25:00 PM
What a delightful piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it. ;0)
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/7/2021 11:52:00 PM
I had alot of fun writing this.
Date: 3/6/2021 5:59:00 PM
this is absolutely charming Joanna, what a delightful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/7/2021 1:33:00 AM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 3/6/2021 4:28:00 PM
Cute little poem. I once knew a woman named Ellie who fit the description.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/6/2021 4:43:00 PM
:-) just thought it was a nice fun poem. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment.