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Eclectic Wonders In Seasonal Flowers --- a Collab

Words in italic by Angeline Lim Words in regular font by Timothy Hicks Hydrangea blues blooming in seven colors versatile at heart Storm clouds in a tantrum and yet the rainbow Gently wipes away a facade reveals a layer hidden within Pretty just like yesterday red-hot pokers Playing fireworks on lovers' palates scintillating senses The shared spaghetti noodle growing shorter Sunlight fading into a sweet dream aromatic Osmanthus 'tween the slits of enclosed fingers flashes of a firefly Smolders of passion unfolding within Chrysanthemum mysteries Instead of the bee her tender touch Frozen fixture all the yellow once in the field now in the moon Aesthetic display of a crystallized Rose quartz The snowy hills at this time a strange warmth morning blush Purplish Crocuses pop their cheerful heads up kisses blown Thinking himself to be King Arthur startled butterflies Surprised Tulips opening lips with an exclamation August heat! there goes the evidence of the snail Spiraling down a Corkscrew vine into a time portal P.S. Haven't been on lately ... hope all is well with everyone :)

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Date: 10/4/2016 10:30:00 PM
Shades of dark and light in this wonderful collaboration. Congratulations to the both of you on the wonderful piece! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:20:00 PM
Your two styles complement each other beautifully. Well done to both of you. Ooh, first stanza there is so so lovely...I also like your lines on the 11th stanza...I can picture that so well. Immensely beautiful! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/4/2016 9:23:00 AM
Yes all is well Timothy. Thanks for the visit. I enjoyed this Colaboration. Well done!
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Date: 8/31/2016 2:54:00 PM
what lovely imagery Timothy and Angeline its a joy to drop by and read this today:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:49:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 8/29/2016 11:00:00 AM
Very nice Tim.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thanks Pashang!
Date: 8/15/2016 1:24:00 PM
Happy Birthday Timothy : ))))
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:44:00 PM
Thanks Tim! Sorry for the late response ... Appreciate you stopping by to wish me a happy birthday!
Date: 8/15/2016 10:20:00 AM
On another note... Stopping by to wish you a Happy Birthday, hope you enjoy your day. Hugs and more hugs.... Linda
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:44:00 PM
Awww thanks for the birthday wish, PD!
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Date: 8/15/2016 10:20:00 AM
Happy Birthday
Date: 8/15/2016 10:19:00 AM
Timothy, a wonderful collaboration. :) you are right, the heat is taking its time to turn over a new season... hugs...Linda
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thanks PD! Looking forward to Autumn for sure :)
Date: 8/13/2016 7:42:00 AM
Interesting play on each others words. A complete contrast yet flows well. Well done to both of you.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thanks James!
Date: 8/9/2016 2:12:00 AM
A truly enjoyable Rengay, Angeline and Timothy. Two contrasting minds at play! Good to see you back Tim! Regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:33:00 PM
I hope I can stop by more often ... that's for sure! Thanks for your thoughtful comments as always Paul!
Date: 8/6/2016 10:24:00 AM
I love collaborative poems! You have some wonderful imagery here. Great work!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Christine!
Date: 8/3/2016 6:50:00 AM
A wonderful contrast of feminine and masculine in harmony. Have missed hearing from you but know you are busy. Keep the ink flowing . You always inspire. Sunflower wishes, SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 10:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Suz! It didn't occur to me about the masculine/ feminine contrast, but reading it again I can see what you mean!
Date: 8/2/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Timothy for showing me this Renga style. It was really a joy to write. I learn so much about flower names.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 9:59:00 PM
'Twas a pleasure writing with you Angeline!
Date: 8/1/2016 4:05:00 PM
Fantastic imagery. I love what you two did. Soupmail.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 8/1/2016 3:18:00 PM
Fantastic Imagery..So many amazing lines.Well done you two..My fave.Lines are 'The shared spagetti noodles growing shorter'.I can see two lips getting closer, and the first three lines 'Hydrangea blues...etc', awesome.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine! This collaboration took a bit of time, but it was well worth it in the end :)
Date: 8/1/2016 12:26:00 PM
I absolutely love this write Angeline and Timothy...I read it a few times to grasp all the subtle nuances and meaning...a fav
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 9/3/2016 9:45:00 PM
Thanks Tim! And of course, I appreciate the fave! :D

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