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Echoes of a Reflection

Echoes of a reflection mourn for you, distant memories cry out in the night- Silhouettes of ebon ways adore you, for I have been blinded by pain’s poor sight. Nothing is better; nothing seems quite right... just as long as you can be mine tonight. I sat in the diner and saw you stare, you and your masculine scent so intense- Peaceful and barren skin so debonair, with a passionate fever so immense. You walked up to me, it was very tense, all of a sudden, my life didn’t make sense. Echoes of a reflection cry in vain, they cease to exist when you are so near- You captured my essence, heartache remains, leaving nothing but a soft shadowed tear. All the shocking insanity, the fear... left me echoing alone, standing here. You need not worry for I'm not afraid... reminiscence of betrayal conveyed. Urban Sonnet ABABBB-CDCDDD-EFEFFF GG 10 syllables per line January 13th, 2018

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Date: 10/25/2018 8:55:00 AM
How did captivating poem slip through the cracks? I can't believe it received no comments whatsoever! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Laura!:-)
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