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E Is For Enchanted

Enchanted kids lie in their beds, Whistling aloud as evening treads Into a bliss when graces shift, That within each heave dreams uplift Amid the lively hours well played-- To sleep after games on an arcade Where pebbles flew when noon was strong, Till leaps of daylight withered along... Fun-filled is such laughter aglow Yet dusk invites them to rest slow A tuneful hint in gentle chime, Much like their moments quite sublime. E Is For Emotion Contest of Casarah Nance 9/22/2015

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Date: 9/28/2015 11:03:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:08:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 9/26/2015 5:18:00 PM
How sweet this is Nette. Inspiring a child to have sweet dreams. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/26/2015 3:45:00 PM
Such enchantment could lull me to sleep in a dream world! Congrats on your win Nette!
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:53:00 PM
Delightful and enchanting my dear. Congrats on your fine win! Hugs
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Date: 9/25/2015 2:55:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:31:00 PM
Ah nette what a beauty! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/24/2015 2:37:00 PM
Hey Nette, a BIG congratulations on your win! Most definitely an enchanting and lovely piece. Beautifully written and expressed. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/24/2015 12:20:00 PM
Truly an enchanting write. Congratulations, Nette! huggs!
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Date: 9/23/2015 11:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/23/2015 9:33:00 PM
Back here with a BIG congrats. That little darling girl LOVED your poem!!
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Date: 9/23/2015 7:53:00 AM
We loved the enchantment of your piece! Grats on your win!
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Date: 9/22/2015 11:00:00 PM
this is just what I would have expected you to write for this contest. your poems are so enchanting, so you did enchanted. Very pretty!
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Date: 9/22/2015 5:56:00 PM
What a brilliant piece here....I love how it flows so smoothly, hope to see this in the winner list.......A.M.
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Date: 9/22/2015 11:38:00 AM
Oh such a beautiful poem this is.The words danced around my mind and filled me with a sense of satisfaction.Such lovely rhymes too. Great write.
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Date: 9/22/2015 11:31:00 AM
I like this one just dropping off to sleep. One is sure to have good dreams. Very warm and colorful. Love, daver
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Date: 9/22/2015 10:13:00 AM
A beautiful poem, the read was enchanting ... CayCay
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Date: 9/22/2015 9:48:00 AM
This is a good mixture of dream over substance with a friendly aura that entraps the reader into wanting more. Emile.
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