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Dying Too Young

The death angel visited her Angels took her to heaven's gate Where saints and angels were astir In heaven's beauty now awaits Angels took her to heaven's gate Jesus said my sweet child come here In heaven's beauty now awaits Close to His throne she sings with cheer Jesus said my sweet child come here Where saints and angels were astir Close to His throne she sings with cheer The death angel visited her Written for Debbie Guzzi's Contest: When The Going Gets Tough, The Tough Gets going Written this 27th day of May, 2013

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/12/2013 1:10:00 AM

Well I like this very much, and it's a winner ;} thank you for liking my " She Waits" , thank you for your always nice comments ;}

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/2/2013 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations on a fantastic win, Sara! This is very beautiful and definitely one for my favs. List. Always, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/2/2013 6:42:00 PM

Hope you are well and enjoying summer! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Therese Bacha

Date: 6/2/2013 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations Sara, very nice poem, Love Terry xoxo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/1/2013 3:41:00 AM

hi and congrats Sara love, well done xx

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 5/31/2013 8:15:00 PM

Sara, very sad heartfelt poem, you capture the loss well. Congratulations on your win.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/31/2013 10:27:00 AM

An excellent quill Sara. Very well written. Congrats to you on your well deserved win. AO

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/31/2013 9:12:00 AM

Representation of an angel is an assurance to heaven's gate. Godly words to glorify the reunion with our creator. Congratulations on your win, Sara. (^_^) Noel.

Joseph May

Date: 5/30/2013 4:09:00 PM

very good pantoum Sara.....winning wishes

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 5/29/2013 6:25:00 AM

gates,angels, and songs!. this is crystal like.good job. learned about your surgery only 2day.even though its been a while, accept my greeting.The Lord preserve you for us all.