Lasting Beauty
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*Image of Paramedics Assist Dying Wish by news18.
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Lasting Beauty
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Dying
from cancer,
yon sea ... smiles,
"T-a-i-wan", she said it~~
beautifully.
(He holds back a flood of tears)
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2019 May 25
*Modern Cinquain
Line 1 has one word (the title).
Line 2 has two words that describe the title.
Line 3 has three words that tell the action.
Line 4 has four words that express the feeling
Line 5 has one word which recalls the title.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2019
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