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Dusty Heart

Since the day he took leave of the earthly plane, my heart has been gathering dust. Now it is only the memories that remain; standing beside his precious sea, they’re carried on a gust as I fall to my knees, devoid of love and trust. When you’ve had the best, what can compare? Sharing just four years of marriage, we were truly blessed. In my dreams I can still see him standing there; to withstand such a loss, leads only to despair. Handsome, brilliant and kind, he was taken from our nest too soon. Let the dust gather for I’ll never find another who’ll make me swoon as I first did on the beach with John that magic night in June. Written March 3, 2015

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Date: 11/27/2016 3:07:00 PM
I can see a great depth of feeling here Carolyn, such memories will never tarnish or wear away, pleased to have read these strong lines.'
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Date: 10/21/2016 5:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem dear Carolyn. Makes me wonder if we really lose someone as long as he still exists so alive in our mind. Have a nice day.
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Date: 7/23/2016 7:59:00 AM
I love this one and Disposable wisdom is my fav keep it up
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Date: 6/2/2015 7:57:00 AM
You have a unique way of expressing yourself, I was moved by this sad yet celebratory piece.
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:39:00 AM
Oh My dear Carol, this made me deeply involved, it's always good to recollect our loved ones, just to apprise you, their souls will always watch over us in silence Bryan Loves
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Date: 3/12/2015 12:21:00 PM
Sad remembrance beautifully expressed with heartfelt deep emotion. i feel here 7+. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:56:00 PM
this is heart rending yet so exquisite Carolyn fantastic pen hugs 7+
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Date: 3/5/2015 12:32:00 PM
This is beautiful, Carolyn! Some go a lifetime and never feel the love you had for those four years...true love knows no bounds...you will see him again. Hugs, Rhonda
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/5/2015 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda, it is knowing that we'll meet again that keeps me going.
Date: 3/5/2015 7:02:00 AM
A monument to a love lost that eternal remains! I wish to no one to go through what you have been through dear, Carolyn!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/5/2015 1:46:00 PM
There are people whose lives have been tougher than mine. I remember them whenever I start to feel self pity. Thanks for reading, Demetrios.
Date: 3/4/2015 11:26:00 AM
I'm touched by these lines, Carolyn!! Such a pity that married bliss came too soon to an end. You wrote this lovingly, from the heart. Sad, but beautiful. Love and hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/5/2015 1:48:00 PM
Yes, Paul. Straight from my heart. John was an amazing man.
Date: 3/3/2015 10:09:00 PM
Oh my dear..this makes me sad...life can be so unfair. BG
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:02:00 PM
It's beautifully sad and all the more so since it is true. I think this one deserves a high win!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/3/2015 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Only those who've known me for a while would know how true this is.
Date: 3/3/2015 5:25:00 PM
Oh Carolyn the imagery here is so so sad but so beautifully penned - the final stanza is so so touching it is obvious he was the love of your life:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/3/2015 5:14:00 PM
Your love for John is shining through your words Carolyn...All the best to you...hugs Tim
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