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Dust---- Who Cares

She was immensely house proud mess not a single trace, covers on furniture like a shroud, Dust ….. oh my dare not show its face Until……. That day she fell over the vacuum hose she lay on the floor in so much pain, wishing, she hadn’t spotted the dust mote knew her life wouldn’t be the same. Had to sit there, her leg in plaster looking at things that landed on her gleam. A thin film of dust was straddling the furniture so much so, she could write her name. Then realised looking sparkling wasn’t the answer dust was an item we could all live with. Friends who called, how the room looked didn’t matter, an out reaching hand of caring was what they could give.
Penned 19/03/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/19/2017 6:39:00 PM
This one is a really, really good one. It speaks to priorities. A very important reminder these days. Get your priorities in order. Fav.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:12:00 PM
Maurice glad you liked it my friend....Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 1:30:00 PM
It's great to have amazing friends :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:12:00 PM
yes it is I am lucky to have some.....Seren

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