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Drugged--Unsayable

A kaleidoscope of unknown thrill rushes Within my swollen veins, needle-pricked – And the liquid opiate carries me high, high Like a Boeing jet, a glistening show of heady euphoria Intoxicated by multi-colored dreams, away from The pungent flavor of bleak reality where I Am nothing but a dot--- ‘till the sensation drains . My body trembles ,unable to wait for next kick of midnight. Nov 25, 2017 Nette Onclaud Contest, Unsayable

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Date: 12/2/2017 11:18:00 AM
Wow, this poem stuns; well written, but on such a sadly compelling subject. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/30/2017 5:42:00 PM
Wonderful and creative , Noel, ..Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/25/2017 2:38:00 AM
You wrote very well and poetically on this sad subject. My thought reactions are bouncing around too much right now for me to share intelligently, but know I get this and all displayed therein. Good luck, and prayers that this is history or imagination rather than current reality. All the best ... CayCay
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