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I woke to thrumming heartbeats, early morn, The flavor, you, still sweet upon my tongue, With lasting sways of passion, felt and born, As all such dreams of you are gently wrung. We'd met beneath a swollen summer moon - A soft-sand beach, and just a touch of sin, I swam with you a lake of starlight, strewn, And tasted drops of moonlight from your skin. That endless night of passions carried on, Our bodies merging like a hand and glove, A dream of ecstasy that scorned the dawn, Lost deep within the maelstrom of our love. Now trickle tears upon love's passing pall, For truth be known, it was no dream at all. ~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "Strand Special 8, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/24/2019 9:41:00 AM
Ahh Gregory again I am back to congratulate this wonderful poem! Wow seems we keep meeting a lot here lately! Haha! Loved it Gregory maybe one day we can collab? Haha! But hey it's a thought;) congrats again and happy holidays!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/27/2019 7:08:00 PM
I would be happy to do a collaboration with you, Brenda - I think I've only done one since I've been here with Andrea, and it was a last-minute thing. Hit me up with a Soupie if you're serious, and thank you so much for the kind comments - blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 11/26/2019 4:19:00 PM
Ok....mmm....what can I say... mmmm.......lovely...winner!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/27/2019 9:33:00 AM
Many kind thanks, John, I greatly appreciate it ... blessings to you, Brother! :o)
Date: 11/26/2019 1:31:00 PM
Wow... I was swept... it was lovely. Ann
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/27/2019 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem ... blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3

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