Dreaming

dreaming just of you babe dangerous thing to do diet of you needed delivered with your charm drifting on a love cloud dancing within your arms delusion on its way Penned 27 August 2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2016 12:40:00 PM

aww Seren this is delightful:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2016 12:04:00 AM

Thanks Jan.....Seren

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 8:00:00 PM

Such a romantic dream, Seren. A wonderful Pleaides. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2016 12:05:00 AM

Kim thank you so much....Seren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 12:47:00 AM

A really creative Pleiades Seren. I loved your ending! Congratulations on your win! ; )

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/1/2016 6:39:00 PM

Thanks Connie much appreciated....Seren

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:39:00 AM

Great little write, Seren, like the the foreoding ending. Congrats! Viv x

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/1/2016 6:38:00 PM

Hi Viv Nice to see you here, many thx for the congrats... Seren

Lu Loo

Date: 8/31/2016 8:05:00 PM

Seren, beautifully written...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/1/2016 6:37:00 PM

hi Thanks so much for your congrats....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/30/2016 6:35:00 AM

One lucky guy Seren, I'm jealous. I super love this. A Big Fav!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/30/2016 3:20:00 PM

Hi my friend lovely to see you thanks for liking my words......Seren

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/28/2016 5:19:00 PM

aww delightfully dangerous...that is love at its finest... nice D write!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/30/2016 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Cas. ....Seren

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/28/2016 1:17:00 PM

I like your poetry,it was so different I enjoyed reading your poem

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/28/2016 4:30:00 PM

Darlene so nice of you....Seren