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Dream Walking

Clouds are dancing the slowest waltz my heart beat slows as does gestalt an umber light glows in the ground, without making the smallest sound Trees swaying out of time and rivers flow without a rhyme eyes grow heavy head falls beyond, a violin sings a break in the pond as chariots on waves start rolling in, the dreamtime faded and reality set in ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/8/2011 7:03:00 AM
found another Aussie mate, on this site, great poem relates, keep on writing Jayne....Don
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:03:00 AM
this is awesome, Jayne. Harry
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:59:00 PM
soupmail
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:51:00 PM
Hey, that IS very dreamlike Jayne. So you were in the hosptial, huh? thanks for your newsy comments and how cool your dad is a Hallween baby!
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Date: 10/18/2010 4:54:00 AM
lovely again!Celene
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:20:00 AM
The ending is beautiful. Great write.
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:20:00 AM
The ending is beautiful. Great write.
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Date: 10/15/2010 7:09:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Jayne. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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