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and in my dream I was in Paris, France walking on a lonely street, oh yes I was taking a chance I seemed to be in a deep trance the brick architecture was old, beautiful and fading it was quite foggy and wet with gentle rain falling the looming Eiffel Tower was in the distance somehow, I knew this had been my destination it shone in gold brilliance it was a bright beacon I walked up a steep spiral staircase to the very top waiting- you kissed my teardrop I was weeping and never felt the drop . . . ____________________________ February 22, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/I dreamt of him again Copyright Protected, ID 18-9965-02 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to, Late February 2018 Standard sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 3/2/2018 8:43:00 PM
An absolutely darling poem. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:10:00 AM
Line, thank you for the congrats and the compliment ~
Date: 2/28/2018 10:17:00 AM
A heart-breaker and gut-wrencher. Nice going...Interesting how you started this poem; "in medias res," so to speak. Congrats on a well-deserved winner. :)gw
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:10:00 AM
Gershon, thank you for the great comment and the congrats, I start all my dream poems like that !
Date: 2/28/2018 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations B.W., Spent a few days there, a wonderful city. Tom
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:11:00 AM
Tom, thank you for the congratulations, although born in Canada, my family does come from Paris ~
Date: 2/23/2018 12:54:00 AM
I love Paris and your poem enchants the heart Constance. A beautiful write! : )
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Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2018 2:16:00 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment ~

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