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Dragontails never ask why Spiky fronds so scaly Oh My – Oh My Lurking shady and shaly In the dark unfurls Spiky fronds so scaly Swirly ferns and curls Deep greenish and purplish In the dark unfurls Close your eyes to make a wish Wild whirls ever so rare Deep greenish and purplish Without a whisper or a care Bizarre long and curly avails Wild whirls ever so rare Whimsically curtails Dragontails never ask why Dreamy magical dragon tales Oh My – Oh My AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on May 4, 2018 for DANDELIONS TIGER LILIES AND BEARBERRIES OH MY CONTEST sponsored by MAUREEN MCGREAVY - RANKED 6TH

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/30/2018 1:57:00 PM

Well done, Line! I forgot all about these ferns! Nice Terzanelle, and congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2018 2:52:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2018 5:47:00 PM

Congrats, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 8:57:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2018 4:03:00 PM

Awesome creative verse, Line, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 8:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/25/2018 9:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this well-written poem. An awesome write that I enjoyed.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 9:30:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2018 4:48:00 PM

Many congrats Line .. I've googled and now I KNOW what dragon tails are:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 5:03:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jan. These beautiful ferns do look like dragon tails, don't they?

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/25/2018 1:28:00 PM

So lovely, I can see them come to life! Congratulations on your win! Thank you too for your support Line :) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 5:03:00 PM

Thanks you so much, Maureen. I enjoyed this contest.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/25/2018 12:45:00 PM

OH MY.......You nailed it !! Dragontails....I wish I had thought of this lovely fern ! Congrats for thinking outside the box !!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Carrie.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/9/2018 8:33:00 PM

So rhythmic. Swept me along. And but you would be ingenious to come up with a terznelle?! Where DO you find these unusual formats?! (Yeah, I know, they're available---but that doesn't mean anyone can actually make them sing!!). Bravo, Line! ~ gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

Constance La France

Date: 5/9/2018 8:37:00 AM

Line, beautifully penned, I too was lost in the world of the Dragontails, well done

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 8:10:00 PM

Sweet comment, BW. Thanks.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/7/2018 7:38:00 PM

I love it! It took me along as I read it. It made me forget my surrounding for a moment. Thanks for that!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 7:41:00 PM

What a lovely compliment. Thank you, Timothy.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 5/7/2018 1:42:00 AM

The words and the colours and the rhythm / motion of this poem fantastic...you transported me from the page into the story, flying and whirling. Magic and beautiful Line. x

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2018 7:28:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Leanne. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/6/2018 8:31:00 PM

I like the alliterations. Surreal, sensual and super satisfactorily superb.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/6/2018 8:34:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2018 7:35:00 AM

Hi Line...I believe this delightful poem is based on the fantasy adventure children's television series Dragon Tales, though it could also be an offshoot of a comic website named Dragontails. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/6/2018 8:35:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Paul. But I don't have kids so have never seen these, you are way ahead of me.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/6/2018 7:13:00 AM

Delightfully imaginative, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/6/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2018 7:53:00 PM

I like Kim's word for your poem. Whimsical! A bit of whimsy sometimes just strikes the chord for us! You are incredible how fast you come up with poetry, Line!! (and Joe just phoned me he is on his way home as I START out my comments.... OH MY)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2018 8:05:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. There's never enough time for everything we want to do.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/5/2018 7:28:00 PM

Very whimsical!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2018 8:03:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. I like whimsical.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 5/5/2018 12:32:00 PM

Unrestrained fancy..I visualize.Well done. Regards.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Rajat.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/5/2018 11:22:00 AM

Hi Line, The imagery and content in this well written piece were top notch. You have a great imagination. Well done:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. Mush appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/5/2018 8:06:00 AM

Beautiful and interesting, Line I mean the "never ask why" meaning that they are perhaps at peace I really liked it xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Mike.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2018 5:48:00 PM

fabulous work of fantasy with vivid imagery and i like the form you used Line:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2018 6:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. Very appreciated.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/4/2018 5:41:00 PM

daring piece of fantasy here in a garden of hostas, maybe? My grandkids still like the childhood cartoon series, Dragon Tales, I noted a switch in your final quatrain. Good read, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2018 6:17:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Reason. Much appreciated.