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Doing Nothing With You

I remember that night It was a night like many others The living room was still, dimly lit The teal blue paint on the walls echoed serenity The radio played And we were together By all accounts, it was unremarkable We were bored Yet, we were so much younger Still climbing that mountain Still seeking and gathering That was so long ago I really only remember that particular night Because of the music New music which became a favorite If only we could really have known, really felt How important the journey And not necessarily the goal Perhaps we’d have been happy To slow it down a bit To appreciate what we had How I’d love to be able to revisit that night To sit in that room once again Candles glowing And be doing nothing with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/5/2018 12:35:00 PM
Beautiful, bittersweet piece, Mike. Oh, yes, hindsight's always 20/20! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/5/2018 2:42:00 PM
It sure is Janice,] Thank you so much xxoo
Date: 11/1/2018 1:48:00 PM
- There are so many moments we want to "meet again" ... I think there was love in the air this night - A lovely writing, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/1/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 10/31/2018 3:14:00 PM
And yet -- if not for hindsight's magic... :) gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/31/2018 8:02:00 PM
So true Gershon!!
Date: 10/31/2018 8:52:00 AM
That “nothing” was really something. Thanks for bringing us into your world.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/31/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Richard !!
Date: 10/31/2018 7:49:00 AM
The journey matters more that the destination! Encapsulated in time memories make us live the past at will! Wonderful writing dear, Mike!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/31/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios!!
Date: 10/29/2018 11:36:00 AM
Great insightful poem, Mike When times get rough , all we have is our good memories Ralph Sergi
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/29/2018 2:39:00 PM
So true Ralph, Thanks so much !!! I really appreciate your visit.
Date: 10/26/2018 3:48:00 PM
Like your favourite waste of time... Nice penning...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2018 3:55:00 PM
You may be right SO, thank you !!!
Date: 10/26/2018 1:24:00 PM
A journey back to what could have been..wonderfully depicted story, Mike. Enjoyed reading your poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!!~
Date: 10/26/2018 12:55:00 PM
Very well expressed Mike. A special longing for a time to replay from the past :) Happy Friday !
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2018 12:56:00 PM
Happy Friday Heidi!! Thank you xxoo
Date: 10/26/2018 12:47:00 PM
If only we could revisit some of those days that sometimes come to mind but now distant fond memories. Lovely verse Mike. Tom.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Tom, Have a great evening !!

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