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Divine Things

My heart rejoices at the smallest of things The dew leaving its kiss on a blushing rose A gentle breeze as the crystal windchime rings My heart rejoices at the smallest of things Delightful cooing as the mourning dove sings The quenching rain as a wheat field harvest grows My heart rejoices at the smallest of things The dew leaving its kiss on a blushing rose AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on September 8, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 1, APRIL 2019 - EIGHT LINE FORM sponsored by DEAR HEART - WIISHKOBI ODE

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Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2019 11:55:00 AM

Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/16/2019 8:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Constance. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2019 12:53:00 PM

- Line, congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2019 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 3:03:00 AM

Your first line sets up the rest of the poem and makes it pretty perfect.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/10/2019 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/8/2019 7:42:00 PM

Extra lovely. You're Muse is on fire today... A cinch in the contest. Best always, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2019 8:09:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. The competition is fierce! LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/10/2019 11:49:00 AM

Quite surprised that your lovely triolet didn't place much higher, but of course, there's no accounting for individual taste, is there? Congrats on your placement in the contest with this beauty. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 1:00:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.