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Divine

Beneath that frame you wear so well, a sinner or a saint? A simmering of lust I smell within your self-restraint. It won’t be too much longer now; The hunger’s in your eyes. I feel it on your fevered brow; I hear it in your sighs. You can’t survive my full assault. You’re losing your facade. It’s coming down. It’s not my fault. You’ll see you’ve been a fraud. For underneath that skin, you burn, and soon you will be mine. Before this night is through, you’ll learn that burning is divine. For PD's Love Poem Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/25/2013 2:41:00 PM
Ahh lust such a strange emotion, good, interesting 'take' on the contest! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:45:00 PM
Andrea, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2013 2:14:00 PM
wow i like this one,, you sure know how to keep the readers interest
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Date: 9/6/2011 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's "Lost and Found" contest Andrea. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "LOST AND FOUND" poetry contest sponsored by Catie Lindsey.
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Date: 9/4/2011 5:47:00 PM
Very nice...mysterious! Good luck as Catie judges. CR
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:38:00 AM
This is awesome, Andrea. I enjoyed it that much. Congratulations, dear. Luv, Dinda. :)
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:42:00 PM
Knew this was a winner! Congrats Andrea! Stunning work :-) Cyndi
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Date: 9/3/2011 6:49:00 PM
Fine piece, Andrea.Congratulations on well deserved win..
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:51:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win with this dynamic piece of poetry my friend.. awesome words that touch the heart ..luv..
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:35:00 PM
Is it just me, or is it warm in here. Great poem Andrea. Congrats
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Date: 9/3/2011 1:45:00 PM
hey Andrea congrats on a great win..David
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Date: 8/26/2011 5:12:00 PM
I've already read this one, I think - and it's just as good on the second reading
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Date: 8/26/2011 3:24:00 AM
An interesting take Andrea, on the temporal and divine..all best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:57:00 PM
excellent Andrea.. luv the intro lines.. great rhyme.. and title is cool luv..good luck in the contest.. hope to read your collab soon..
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:35:00 PM
Hot stuff! You paint a rosy picture here. You have soup mail. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:36:00 PM
Clever piece, Andrea. It's getting late here so I'll be back tomorrow to catch up on your poetry : )
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:36:00 PM
boy is it hot in here! how sultry! I like how your seducer is watching every move, slowly getting his/her way. a good buildup :)
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:41:00 PM
I see you still captivate a beautiful rythmic pen Andrea! I've been on the go; work and little sleep and promise to be back to view more of your magnificent work! Hey wait a second; about this piece...an extraordinary questioning of ones character or moral fiber in the begining lines, weaved together in mystery and lust! A magnificent write indeed!
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:53:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Andrea. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:07:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:16:00 AM
I wonder how this idea came to your mind! this shows your depth of imagination Andrea..A wonderful creation...Best wishes.
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:18:00 AM
What a awesome title for this flaming write, has a dark premise to it. Wishing you all the best for Catie's contest.. Love ya Wilma
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:47:00 AM
oh my stars, andie... vulnerabilty expressed in such a disarminng yet flaming way... winning wishes to you. yup, i'll soup mail soon! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/24/2011 11:20:00 PM
Wow! You make my heart pound. Beyond the message, it is so well written.
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