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Distant Echoes

Raindrops Trickle down on my distant thoughts as clouds drift above The storm That's brewing Within Thunder roars, Rattling The window And then It echoes Through my mind 5-7-19 Charlieku New Form Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/26/2019 10:22:00 PM

Wonderful verse, Joseph, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Charles Messina

Date: 5/25/2019 8:59:00 PM

This is really written so well, Joseph. Awesome poetry my friend. Congratulations on your win. ~Charlie

Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Charles

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/25/2019 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2019 1:27:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great suggestions, Joseph ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/9/2019 2:37:00 PM

Great write Joseph - I love watching a storm at night - I keep our curtains open - so stupendous! Hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2019 11:51:00 AM

- Stormy thoughts which gives echoes ...we all have them from time to time, Joseph - Very well done - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/7/2019 10:46:00 PM

Sometimes, thoughts are like this. Distant, yet they seem to linger so close. You have expressed this so beautifully. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/7/2019 2:37:00 PM

I like the way your poem flows, Joseph..excellent sound effects..till they echo.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2019 2:33:00 PM

Excellent job with this form, Joseph!