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Discarded Affection

Affection ridden Disrespect established Love and tender discarded False tears and all of the fakeness In this moment In this calming bit of second I hate them more than ever My own flesh and blood The disgrace they give The lack of concern The spiteful disrespect The blackness of one’s heart The least of love The covered veil of humanity I have set my mind I have dealt with their wicked thoughts and tries They team up against me Begin to think they are right But every action makes them darker and stupid They are planning for a battle Against someone they think they know Against someone they think is wrong Oh warriors of the light! Aid me, help me, Make them learn Make them think twice The lies they conceal Will make them lose all powers They will perish Against me Against the once-known for a sister

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 1:59:00 PM
Very nice writing, This poem has really good flow. I relate to the fact that I too have brothers and sisters.. Thanks for all your support.
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Your welcome :D and Thank You for ur Kind comments :D
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Your welcome :D and Thank You for ur Kind comments :D
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Your welcome :D and Thank You for ur Kind comments :D
Date: 5/26/2011 11:08:00 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Louzana. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 5/31/2011 8:12:00 AM
Thank You Carol For reading My poetry and Keeping up with what i write, I really Appreciate Your kind comments and i hope your days as well to be filled with love and joy and inspiration Thank You Carol Love, Louzana
Date: 5/26/2011 6:06:00 AM
Nice!!! good one!!!
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 5/31/2011 8:10:00 AM
Thank You :D

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