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We are all actually dying. Each day we live is one day closer to our final day. So,when I say I hope we all die slowly, what I actually mean by that is "I hope you all live wonderful long lives" Slowly get to our next destination...heaven.

I hope you all die slowly we are all dying may you live to one hundred

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/8/2019 11:17:00 AM

Good one, Charles. Right back at you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2018 7:49:00 AM

I want to make it to 113 so I can be a teen again ;0)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2018 7:50:00 AM

LMAO! I love it!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/26/2018 10:42:00 AM

I will be happy with 80, lol, nice write, have a great day Charles

John Lawless

Date: 7/26/2018 8:18:00 AM

...Birthdays are just stepping stones on the road to death....(at least that's what the birthday card I got says)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/26/2018 8:37:00 AM

The birthday card you received has truth to it! Happy Birthday, John!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/26/2018 5:04:00 AM

Charles, I hope all your wishes come true.. I'd really like to live to at least 100!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/26/2018 5:53:00 AM

I wish you do too my good man, at least 100!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2018 4:34:00 PM

it's in the genes, charles...follow your bliss; nice work!...huggs

Charles Messina
Date: 7/25/2018 6:41:00 PM

Great advice, Nette! I will do that :) Thank you...Huggs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/25/2018 4:15:00 PM

This one made me laugh when I got to the last line,what a sage flip you did!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/25/2018 4:27:00 PM

LOL...Thanks Caren!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2018 3:23:00 PM

Made me smile as my uncle was 100 yesterday, there is longevity on mum's side - her great great aunt was 111 and 121 days and in the Guinness book of records!:-) hugs jan xx

Charles Messina
Date: 7/25/2018 4:31:00 PM

Wow, Happy Birthday to your Uncle! That's amazing someone can live that long....may your aunt rest in peace...Hugs Charlie xx

Sand Blown

Date: 7/25/2018 1:47:00 PM

Live a century: "...there are no accidents... only providence..." morpheus: the matrix

Charles Messina
Date: 7/25/2018 4:34:00 PM

Right! Thanks for the visit, Sand!

Sand Blown

Date: 7/25/2018 1:40:00 PM

soiling and toiling dread comes spoiling and by the hundred they're dead

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/25/2018 1:39:00 PM

You are right, while we are living, we are dying as each moment lingers. Blessings truly are everywhere and need to be held close. Such beautiful and tender thoughts from your heart. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina
Date: 7/25/2018 6:43:00 PM

Thank you. Brandy! So nice of you...you have a kind heart as well dear :) ~Charlie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/25/2018 1:03:00 PM

And you to Charlie , but you're right our clocks ticking away from the day we're born. Tom.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/25/2018 6:46:00 PM

Thank you...you're a good man Tom. And to you as well...Charlie