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Did It Move For You, Mrs Richter?

The birds flew up suddenly, one and all I straightened the paintings upon my wall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2009 5:09:00 PM
This one has me smiling. Such a creative perspective here. Enjoyed it! Karen
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Date: 1/3/2009 4:15:00 AM
sounds like some heavy birds or an earth qauke, will have to think about this all day.
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:43:00 AM
Love the title! Excellent use of this form Nigel! Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/2/2009 4:23:00 AM
Oooo, yup - the earth moved. lol excellent spaces epigram, Nigel, well done. :) LOVE that title. lol Kristin
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