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Describing my beautiful girl and confessing my love

By the glistening morning light and The moon and the stars which shine You are mine, you are mine By the rain which falls when the clouds cry And the night when it s at it s high It s not a lie, it s not a lie I swear on the God who created the land and this sky And I swear on the day When every single river will turn dry The day on which nothing shall be left, not even a fly That I love you but I m shy I swear on your beautiful face that I love you I swear on your beautiful eyes that I love you I swear on your beautiful hairs that i love you I didn't ask for this world I m even willing to give up the heavens and the Earth Just want to feel your lust as in order for me to live You are must coming infront of you makes my this heart beats this isn t your mistake, the blame all those to these eyes for the first time I don t care about my deeds as you re my need and want to do a sin never forget it s you who is drewing me in I can t express my love toward you as in no language there's a word by which I can express how much I love you what If I say that someone as beautiful as you never have been nor will born in the whole Universe your beauty is enough to torn the whole Earth in two what if I say that these are your beautiful blonde hairs which are continuesly falling me in love with you what if I say that I haven t seen any one who s face is more fair what if I say that your beauty is your gorgeous eyes which are blue I m still not done what if I say that all of these combine to make you a special one how can anyone be so beautiful why do you take my breath away how are you perfect in every single way seeing you is the best part of my day you re my angel, my one and only my forever love, so we ll never be lonely it s you and your love which has made me whole all that I ve always felt missing before though I love you today,tomorrow it will be more Everyday you come into my dreams with your hairs wide With an innocent face and mischief in eyes Blushing while standing aside She s not an ordinary girl, but a magic what else could be said the truth is if the angel of death come to me tonight to take me off this earth My last wish shall be to see your face first I ll yearn for you like this as long as I have breath My poetry is a fantasy of yours No matter how much I write for you It will never be enough My pen will do justice I m a poet and you are my poetry ----------------------------------------------------- 2/12/2018

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Date: 7/9/2018 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful to feel loved I love your enthusiasm
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Date: 5/24/2018 9:47:00 AM
I like this!
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Date: 3/13/2018 12:57:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem of love! It is a poem in live. Unique and strong love intertwines with a unique and strong imagination. I like the imagery, the rhyming, the rhythm and music of your poem. It is a celebration of an endearing love! Keep inking beauty!
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Date: 3/12/2018 12:58:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem! I love how the words complement each other! My favourite line is "No matter how much i wrote for you, It will never be enough, My pen will do no justice, I am a poet and you are my poetry" Speaks for the poem itself!
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:30:00 PM
This is an epic and masterful write. I am glad I stopped by this morning.
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 2/24/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your friendly visit and I really appreciate your reply on Mohammed Imtiaz poem as well,
Date: 2/24/2018 12:50:00 PM
hi Fraz this is no doubt a marvellous piece of writing..congratulations for your win i like the last one says all in one "My pen will do justice I m a poet and you are my poetry"
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Date: 2/19/2018 6:25:00 AM
Wow this girl of your dreams sounds like the perfect woman for you and is your total inspiration. I love your last stanza, just perfect this poem of yours. So glad to see that it got a placing Faraz....Maria
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Date: 2/16/2018 8:06:00 PM
Oh what a tender, passionate and heart-melting romantic poem Faraz! Such emotionally beautiful imagery expressing love for her - 'your beauty is enough to torn the whole Earth in two' - powerful and stunning! Congratulations on your win my friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Faraz! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/13/2018 3:11:00 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Faraz :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2018 4:58:00 PM
You describe her very beautifully Faraz.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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