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Deer-Rotwild-Venado

Deer forage in the woods No time yet for being prey Their call re-echoes Rotwild grast im Wald Noch dort droht keine Gefahr Ihr Ruf hallt wider Venado herbaja en el bosque Ningún tiempo aún para ser presa Sus gritos resuenan

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/21/2011 8:55:00 AM

Ooooh! Love this one best, today, Gert! Beautiful, gentle creatures with extraordinary sense of hearing! Thanks for always reading me and takingyour time to leave comments, Gert. Always, Annalise

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/20/2011 10:46:00 AM

An excellent Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Good luck if this is for the contest, it should be. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 12:34:00 PM

Deer are such beautiful animals, Gert. I hate seeing them shot, even though I like the taste of venison. You paint such a vivid image in your haiku. I guess the word "venison" had the same Latin roots as the Spanish "Venado." Always learning from you, my friend, and always appreciative. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 6:46:00 AM

Gert .. a powerful piece on the plight of the animal versus the wild and hunters.. hope u will enter into Charles's contest for this great message and beauty is special and superb.. my friend with luv.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 7:43:00 PM

Hi, Gert. WE are up by the mountains and your poem made me think of our deer how they are running around down by our houses. Three darted in front of my car the other night. Scared me!! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2011 9:41:00 AM

Very descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 9:30:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Gert and the best to you if this is for a contest. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol