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Dedicated To My Wonderful Husband Nicholas We've been looking back and reading memories we made, and it reminds me often of why I stayed. It was you and me against the world, you were mine and I was your girl. The first look you gave set my soul on fire, I can't get enough, please go higher and higher. My desires are filled when we make love, undoubtedly a connection sent from above. All we have seen in the years gone past, reading all the journals knowing it's why we did last. I could touch your perfect skin all day, and then you say “do you wanna go upstairs and play?” There is this part of our connection I can't comprehend, for I am yours, and your also my best friend. Uncontrollable weakness, sunshine in the shade, you are my salvation...our love will never fade. Fade out like sand in the sea, but see we are different, and different we will always be. Not like the fake emotions set off with lust, and they fight in selfishness and bitter mistrust. NO way in hell will we live in that world, for he and I are blessed that we cherish the Lord. I don't think he knows the little things mean the most, it's so rare and deep that is why we are so close. I hear your song you told me to listen, and my heart dropped on the floor with love and condition. The butterfly kisses that we always share, and the way you rub your hands through my soft hair. It all leads up to a very special connection, free of darkness, lying and scary retaliation. Way down the deepest seas, truth is there will never be another you and me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/19/2015 11:43:00 PM
Laura, enjoyed your win. SK
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/15/2015 8:50:00 PM
Thank you SKAT :) you are too sweet :):):)
Date: 10/18/2015 9:58:00 AM
It seems we are both drawn to the Ocean.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2015 1:47:00 PM
I love incorporating anything that has to do with oceans or bodies of water. For some reason it's romantic to me. Thank you Richard, :)
Date: 10/17/2015 4:13:00 AM
You describe this special lasting love with genuine feelings, Laura. You are blessed...and so is he! ~ Congratulations on a most lovely win. // paul
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Paul :) We are a blessed couple. You be blessed also :)
Date: 10/17/2015 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/16/2015 8:58:00 PM
Hi Laura, Congratulations on your win, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "I'm not a terrorist" if you would like or have time. Always & Forever LINDA
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2015 9:24:00 PM
Oh my word I just saw that I took 5th place! Thank you so much, this means so much to me! I'll check out your latest blog for sure! Be blessed, -LU
Date: 10/4/2015 12:05:00 AM
This is a brilliant, vivacious write from you! Your love towards your husband is amazing and it often makes me think "I wish I found the love of my life!". Oh my word, I don't know what to say, but this poem is marvelous...and the title is fantastic. Great job! -DWB
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/6/2015 5:57:00 PM
Thank you!!! :):):)

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