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Pulsating rhythm Fiery beating of drums Repetitive enchantment a seducing deep aum An ancient language for those who can hear disestablishing illusion relinquishing fear Perception transmutes in timeless trance each soul now-imprisoned within the freedom of dance

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Date: 9/19/2021 2:59:00 AM
The omnipresent reverberation, Ohm! Beautiful poem
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Tidy Desk
Date: 9/19/2021 3:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for the read and comment, Unseeking seeker, have a great day.
Date: 8/31/2021 3:50:00 AM
Dance , the ultimate and oldest form of self expression. Great tribute/reminder. Every now and then I manage to dance a problem away. the music/beat imprinted on my mind even when not physically present. Our grandson has danced through his first 2 and a half years, all the signs are he might not grow out of it. Thanks for this one David in NZ
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Tidy Desk
Date: 9/9/2021 12:24:00 PM
You are welcome David, thank you very much for your wonderful comment.
Date: 4/16/2021 4:06:00 PM
Hello Carl Bellerose, as i read this poem, i can focus on the dancers. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2021 5:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2021 5:31:00 AM
Hello Carl, good morning. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Tidy Desk
Date: 4/17/2021 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so much for the read, Darlene, wishing you a wonderful evening.
Date: 4/13/2021 3:45:00 PM
You describe the moment so well, I was lost in the ethereal feel of it all. Thank you for sharing, :)
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Date: 4/13/2021 11:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for the read Mystic Rose, and your wonderful comment, happy dancing.
Date: 4/10/2021 7:08:00 AM
I like this, Carl! It has a smooth rhythm and great rhyme. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/10/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim, your comment has made my day, greatly appreciated, have a wonderful evening.

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