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Deepest Cut of All

Deepest Cut Of All Conjure up soothing visions to delight; sweetest triumphs parading over there. Wound of love deeper, epic pain now slight and images of angelic face so fair. Jewels on sword she used to cut my hand seeing the flash, feeling the awful scare. So deep, up to golden hilt as was planned images of her angelic face so fair. Anointed blade, poison laying on its edge; such finer cuts, never a saddened tear. No deep remorse for her broken love pledge even so, hurting heart still wants her near. Blade easily slides back into its sheath. Stone heart dances on my heart's broken wreath. Robert J. Lindley, 11-09-2015 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 103

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Date: 11/20/2015 11:45:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. I enjoyed this sonnet immensely. Thanks.
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:41:00 AM
Great work sir, very enjoyable.
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:19:00 AM
Robert, good set of words!!! wow! amazing lines.. =`) enjoy the beat and heat!~Olive Eloisa
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