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Deeper

Some describe love as simply colorful... When you can feel The weight of your heart When she says, "I love you", When she holds your hand And whispers in your ear. When you can feel her smile From across the room And know she's thinking about you, You know that what you have Is deeper than color. When you make mistakes And she makes you Feel better about yourself, When you can just be you And she's content When you can go home and relax Because the greatest woman In the world is yours. Then you know that what you have Is deeper than color, And better than heaven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2010 8:24:00 AM
oh my goodness this is one of the most original love poems i have ever heard! i loved it. it made me think about my husband and how much in love we reallly are,the nights we lay in bed justt holding each other are bliss and so is this poem it's very beautiful and i love the last line it is very true i have often hoped that heaven could be what ever i dream just so that we could stay topgether for eternity, dont you think it's cool how just your words made me feel all this! It's a true talent!
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:58:00 AM
Awwww... well check u out wit deep poems so we can enjoy, I love this 1 as well. And ye sumtime love is stronger sumtime love aint a hater after all... and martha right she well b soo fortunate 2 have u boy
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Date: 7/22/2009 1:35:00 AM
omg john i read the peoms i just felt the love this peom is deep john i tell the gurl u fall in love is gona be the luckiest girl in the world
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Date: 7/21/2009 6:42:00 AM
What a love filled poem.Bravo outstanding Jonathan. You are so blessed. Love, Carol
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