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Deception of the Heart...

Tears fall without much thought, Nothing left nothing sought, Crippled by your thoughtless acts, Marked by the unfortunate facts. Heart was lifted above with ecstacy, Seeming farther away towards heresy, Once a word would give me life, Now pain-striken when you say wife. Thought destined to live life full, Loving you made me the fool, Sacrce had i thought twice with you, My heart broken because of you. Thoughts full of sickened hate, So much lost it's too late, Once I've loved now i hate, Broken because of loves poor fate.

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Date: 12/26/2023 6:12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:39:00 AM
well done, Natasha Fuiava, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:17:00 PM
NATASHA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:06:00 AM
amazing poem... SKAT
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