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December - a Time To Remember

December – A Time to Remember Deep into Fall, as brown wrinkly-faced leaves wave adieu Ebony evening sky twinkles with rhinestone-studded stars Chilly winds blow … a sign that winter’s just next door Erubescent sunsets flaunt their majestic golden crowns Mingling with gray and white patches of layered cotton-white clouds Beautiful, ruling planet Jupiter aligns with Venus and Mars Ever the auspicious harbinger of wisdom, prosperity, and power… Reminding my mother of the day I, her first child, was born. 12-06-2015 Contest: Any Poem Written on your Birthday Sponsor: Laura Loo Placement: 3rd

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2018 9:16:00 AM

A charming birthday acrostic. Each word is perfect, Pandita. Well done!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/10/2018 9:38:00 AM

Dear Line, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 11/25/2017 5:24:00 PM

Great verse!! Pandita :) Quite lovely. " Ahh! let us relish and remember the white fallen sands of December from gray green skies tears sheds as the horizon cries" Write On ---James

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/28/2017 8:52:00 AM

My dear friend, your compliments are wonderful poetic pieces onto themselves! Thank you for leaving me your lovely words! Best wishes. Pandita

Lu Loo

Date: 3/15/2017 10:56:00 AM

lovely acrostic Pandita :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/17/2017 9:53:00 PM

Dear Laura, thank you very much for complimenting this piece and including it on your list of winners. Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 3/14/2017 10:38:00 AM

Love the imagery in this nice Acrostic, Pandita, ... Congratulations on your win.. ~* Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/14/2017 11:24:00 AM

Dear Eve, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/2/2016 6:18:00 AM

Love this poem my friend. My son, Justin was born two days before Christmas in 2006. I come from a family of 13 children, none of us born in December.A7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/2/2016 6:56:00 PM

My Mother and I are both December borns. Many thanks, my friend for the great honors you have given me! Wishing you the best in this new year! Pandita

Kitumba Johnmary

Date: 12/17/2015 4:00:00 AM

i like this.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/19/2015 7:55:00 PM

Hi Kitumba, what a very nice compliment! Thank you so much and have a great weekend! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2015 7:06:00 PM

Very nicely done, Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/15/2015 7:36:00 AM

Hi Andie, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you! Pandita

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/13/2015 1:15:00 AM

This a stunning write Pandita! Thank you for a marvellous read!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/15/2015 7:37:00 AM

Dear Maurice, you warmed my heart with your wonderful praises. Thank you for your continued support and encouragement! Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/13/2015 12:41:00 AM

Excellent. A beautiful acrostic. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/15/2015 7:37:00 AM

Hi Ravi, I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita

Shaniki Smith

Date: 12/11/2015 7:44:00 PM

Thank you for the comment on the poem wrote. Keep up the good work! I also like your poems too!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/12/2015 8:13:00 PM

Hi Shaniki, I really appreciate your visit! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2015 5:11:00 PM

I truly like this acrostic, Pandita...beautiful and adorned with striking imagery. #7 // May I wish you the very best for a lovely birthday:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2015 5:15:00 PM

My dear Paul, thank you for the birthday greetings that truly warmed my heart, the high score, and wonderful compliments! Thank you for your constant support and inspiration! Best regards. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/8/2015 4:46:00 AM

This should be set up as an example of how to write a correct Acrostic Pandita! It is awesome! This is a fave! #7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/8/2015 1:06:00 PM

Ahhhhhh! I am so humbled by your lovely compliments, fave, and high score! Thank you so very much, Connie! Pandita

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/7/2015 3:02:00 AM

Very nice Acrostic poem. I am glad that I read it on right time :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/7/2015 8:54:00 AM

I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 12/6/2015 10:50:00 PM

What a fabulous Acrostic! Pandita, I enjoyed reading this piece with its awesome imagery! Well done and a 7! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/6/2015 10:52:00 PM

Hi Kika, thank you very much for your great compliments and high score! Pandita

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/6/2015 8:30:00 PM

A beautiful acrostic, Pandita! Excellent imagery! Love, Kim

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/6/2015 10:03:00 PM

Hi kim, I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita