Deceit

begging for alms in tears and tatters the waif snatched the purse and chuckled February 26, 2016 Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 3/15/2016 8:55:00 PM

Anytime, Balveen... Linda

Date: 3/15/2016 10:59:00 AM

Balveen, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:08:00 PM

Thanks Linda!

Date: 3/9/2016 10:40:00 AM

Well written Balveen. congrats to winK

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:09:00 PM

Thanks Anisha!

Date: 3/8/2016 10:22:00 PM

Delightful poetry Balveen.. congrats on big win!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thanks Upma!

Date: 3/8/2016 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Fragment of Life" contest!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thanks Susan!

Date: 3/7/2016 3:36:00 PM

I remember this one!! Congrats on your great win with it.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Date: 2/26/2016 6:47:00 PM

this is GREAT work, BAlveen. I love the ending.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:24:00 PM

Glad you do! Thanks Andrea!

Date: 2/25/2016 1:34:00 PM

I have seen this happening at an open air market once; they are very good at their 'trade'! ~ Regards // paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 1:36:00 PM

A regular out here! Despite being on our guard we get cheated. Regards, Balveen

Date: 2/25/2016 1:12:00 PM

WOW, Balveen, that is sad. Wishing you the best in this contest... Always ~LINDA~

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 1:31:00 PM

Sigh! Very true too! Thanks and love..