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Death's Courting - Constanza

Though I have no wish to die now for this moment I feel much joy ah death it courts me being coy A time may come I know not how yes endings have a fatal lure and death like life can be demure when sorrow rings my ashen brow and springtime's warmth I can't retain for flesh, but clay it does constrain until that day I'll rail and howl I'll paint the pictures in my mind and stare at holy lights that blind for life is precious, this I know now leave sweet death, and let me sleep today is not the day you'll reap Though I have no wish to die now, a time may come I know not how, when sorrow rings my ashen brow, until that day I'll rail and howl, for life is precious, this I vow. 1/22/14

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Date: 2/13/2014 6:48:00 AM
Again I'm reading this.. Congrats Debbie on your fine win with this nice poem! hugs
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Date: 2/9/2014 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:41:00 PM
I remember how much I liked this one. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/6/2014 6:30:00 PM
Hi Debbie: Since I am ancient, I love poems of death and I especially loved yours. Especially the last stanza. "until that day I'll rail and howl". Kinda like Dylan Thomas' rage rage against the light".
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/6/2014 6:37:00 PM
yup a fav of mine - imitation is the sincerest form of flattery! ;)
Date: 2/3/2014 5:03:00 PM
Wow this truly beautiful write i give it a seven for heavens sake for it is that good. cheri BRAVO LADY
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Date: 1/30/2014 10:22:00 PM
Debs, this is REALLY good. Soupmail. I have two for you now.
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Date: 1/28/2014 11:05:00 PM
Debbie, yesterday I came here and read this poem.. I kept looking at it for a long time. Sometimes I wish I had the ability to communicate without writing, becoz words don't always do justice to how I've felt about a poem. I loved here how you perceived death( some say that's the only truth of Life), and how you know to 'live'.. Yes, we move ahead on our journey and prepare ourselves to embrace that ultimate truth!
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 1/28/2014 11:06:00 PM
... and now, I wanna leave on a happy note :) Winning wishes and smiles and huggs from me to you...!!!
Date: 1/28/2014 10:56:00 AM
'Rail and howl?' You got THAT right cher...How bout railing and howling at me for awhile? I need to be straightened out, I've been a BAD boy lately. You can come down by rail and we'll howl at the moon if you like...Good stuff Deb! - Tim
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/28/2014 3:45:00 PM
hmmmmmmmm train! I like train, summer has good rates too
Date: 1/27/2014 2:08:00 PM
Smooth and deep... wonderful. I'm sure he'll love it! I live the eye-rhyme! holy lights that blind, my favourite.
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Date: 1/27/2014 10:16:00 AM
how haunting is this, debs... SOUP MAIL FOR MY 2ND DRAFT!,,:)
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Date: 1/26/2014 4:14:00 PM
Wow...this is amazing! The last stanza most tantalizing! CORRECTED MY POEM!
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Date: 1/26/2014 12:33:00 PM
The time will come when all our names are called but I'm delighted you intend to enjoy every moment until that time comes. A job well done.
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Date: 1/26/2014 12:28:00 PM
Posted! End words dropped on some lines down! I use android! Just pull them up!
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Date: 1/25/2014 11:02:00 PM
SOUP MAIL...SONNET
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Date: 1/25/2014 8:49:00 PM
Loved it all the way. A fantastic poem, thanks for showing us how. "today is not the day you'll reap", just fantastic.
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Date: 1/24/2014 3:30:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/24/2014 11:40:00 AM
soup mail...
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Date: 1/23/2014 5:49:00 PM
Death is worthy of contemplation if it leads to fully living each day. Howl away Debbie!
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Date: 1/23/2014 5:19:00 PM
ok done and soup mailed you
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Date: 1/23/2014 3:27:00 PM
enjoy your railing and howling, Debs - lovely write, my friend
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Date: 1/23/2014 12:30:00 PM
This is very well written. I agree with everything here. I have been so close to death too many times and I am still here. As you say I will die, but not today. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 1/23/2014 11:57:00 AM
Perfection indeed…Sara..If for a contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..
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Date: 1/23/2014 11:50:00 AM
Soup mail...
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Date: 1/23/2014 10:12:00 AM
I like this. Death used to be just a word to me. I'll be seventy-six in a couple of months, death is no longer just a word. It is something which occupies my thoughts on a daily basis. It seems I have some good company.
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:07:00 PM
better than nicely writen. you took a style and made it into something worth reading. so true were the words as they passed through my mind. especially the line i have no desire to die now. that line stuck to me.
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