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The Life of Death

It takes its stand the moment we are born; first breath of life invites its rival, death, to hand in hand walk on a path that leads, without exception, to life's certain end. The cloud of death does shadow all of us until it strikes...obscure, the why or when. Expected, accidental, or by choice; the cycle never fails from start to end. The older we become, the more aware of death's awaiting stage we come to be, as friends and family take hold its hand, bid life goodbye and watch their circle close. Life is a borrowed gem, a wondrous gift, so like a rose that buds, then fully blooms until at last, it withers in the end as life and death their dual chorus sing. We may live on through after-life, so clear for those who do believe, God takes us home. But also through our children, like the rose, rebirth, new life comes forth to start again. Sandra M. Haight ~5th Place~ Standard Contest: 450 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 06/13/2018 ~7th Place~ Contest: Death Sponsor: Craig Cornish Judged:11/13/2017

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Date: 6/15/2018 9:43:00 AM
Back with more congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:50:00 PM
Enjoyed. Congrats...bbn
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/14/2018 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 4/10/2018 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I have five children and three step-children, so I must be okay on that score...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2018 7:24:00 PM
Good for you, Kai! You will live on wonderfully! Thanks for the visit and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 4/9/2018 11:57:00 AM
Back with most deserved congrats, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you again, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2018 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win with such a beautiful poem on death.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/8/2018 7:26:00 AM
The thought that death walks hand in hand with life awaiting its moment, something to ponder. Nicely written, Sandra, congrats on your win. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your uplifting comments and congrats! I appreciate your visits and supports so much. Sandra
Date: 4/7/2018 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem of life to death. Very tender and real. Excellent.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:39:00 PM
Once again, Susan, I am so appreciative of your visits and very supportive and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/7/2018 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/6/2018 4:22:00 PM
Great write Sandra..Congrats on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for visiting my poem and for your positive comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 4/6/2018 12:37:00 PM
Congrats!!! Sandra, my dear and talented friend...death should take notes lol...stay in the light...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, ^WW^, for your visit and uplifting comments and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 4/6/2018 10:02:00 AM
Life and death intertwined from our first breath. You done this very well Sandra . Congratulations. Tom.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tom, for reading my poem and for your supportive comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 2/10/2018 1:51:00 PM
Returning with a big congrats Sandra for you excellent poem. it was a pleasure to read this lovely piece again. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/8/2018 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra ! Great choice. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/5/2018 10:01:00 PM
What a lovely poem that just exudes an overwhelming sensation of peace. Just had to FAVE it. Thank you, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/6/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line, for your lovely comments and for the fave! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/5/2018 4:39:00 PM
A subject we can all relate to Sandra.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/6/2018 4:55:00 PM
Thank you for offering this contest, Silent One. I appreciate my placement and ability to share it with others again, as well as to read all the other fine poems on your winners' list. Sandra
Date: 11/18/2017 8:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/6/2018 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/16/2017 2:06:00 PM
This is my number one pick, Sandra. Absolutely top-notch. Many congrats on a masterpiece of writing. Sincerely, Elaine
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:15:00 PM
Hi, Elaine. Thank you so much for your visit and uplifting and encouraging comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/14/2017 9:10:00 AM
A true thought in every line with skilled blank verse. The ending is wonderful in that it leaves the one with hope. Congratulations! Sometimes, we fail to see the greatness in front of us.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:14:00 PM
Hi, Janis, thank you so much for your very supportive and uplifting comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed reading my poem. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/14/2017 1:43:00 AM
Sadly lovely with a positive ending Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, James. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:18:00 PM
a beautiful weaving of "death as partner in the cycles of life". Well done Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 11/13/2017 1:16:00 PM
Good to see one of my favorite writers on the list. Love your poem and its message. Congrats Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:11:00 PM
Aww...so sweet of you, Rob! Thanks ever so much for your visit and very supportive comments! Sandra
Date: 11/13/2017 12:07:00 PM
Sandra, I LOVE a poem that makes me smile and tear up simultaneously--like this masterpiece! Congrats on your win! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:10:00 PM
Hi, Janice, thank you so much for your uplifting comment and congrats! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/21/2017 10:15:00 PM
Such a wonderfully written and thoughtful poem Sandra about life's inevitable end. Your first two lines are stunning and sets the stage nicely for your following lines on the theme of death. Though it's dark subject matter, you write your poem with light and beauty. Good luck in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2017 5:15:00 PM
Susan, that you very much for your lovely and uplifting comment about this poem. I so much appreciate your visits and support! Hugs, Sandra

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