Dear Santa, Please

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Dear Santa, I want a puppy for Christmas, daddy says I'm not responsible . . . but I am, Santa, really I AM ! Can he be a boy and not too big 'cause I'm little have floppy ears and be real cuddly and can you maybe bring toys for him to play with . . . Santa, I don't need anything else, just the puppy, PLEASE ! _______________________ December 7, 2017 Poetry/Verse/Dear Santa, Please Copyright Protected, ID 17-9694-39-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 2:44:00 PM

Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2017 4:45:00 PM

:) nicely done, Broken Wings, luck in the contest hugs eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/8/2017 7:22:00 PM

Oh, this just plucks my heartstrings Broken Wings. A lovely and heartfelt write that I can feel. I hope this child receives her puppy on Christmas morning :) A fantastic poem, good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2017 7:22:00 AM

Very cute, loving depiction--well written, BW--best for a win!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/7/2017 7:08:00 PM

It's hard to write like a child's voice, but you did it and made me want a puppy, too.