Day and Night

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"DAY AND NIGHT" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 01 AUGUST 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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"Why oh you obscure night so many secrets do you keep?" Asked the curious bright day. "Since secrets you can keep none, how could I an answer provide?" Replied the night with a grin! © Demetrios Trifiatis 01 August 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 8/2/2017 6:29:00 AM

I really love this one. Secrets of the Night, to be kept from the Day. A personification that is a fav, and the highest rating if I could give you one. Thanks for the inspiration Dearest Demetrios....Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2017 8:51:00 AM

You so gracious dearest, Maria! Thank you for each visit and comment you make my friend!

Maria Williams
Date: 8/2/2017 6:30:00 AM

All your flowers are just beautiful. Thanks for sharing them

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2017 9:32:00 AM

Ha ha, such witty conversation! Enjoyed much, wise Demetrios:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2017 2:08:00 AM

Little sister, Jo thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/1/2017 9:27:00 AM

Hallo Herr Professor, I always enjoy your personification writes very much. The "Night" is the master of secrets -- this is to be expected. Enjoyed This One!! Alles Gute!! Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2017 2:06:00 AM

Danke sehr mein freund, Gary. It is so good to see you again my friend! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2017 5:08:00 AM

- Question answered wisely, a wonderful poem my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2017 2:04:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/1/2017 4:28:00 AM

This is such an intriguing and delightful read! I surely enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You have personified me to the fullest with this superior piece my friend! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2017 2:01:00 AM

You are extremely kind my friend, Russell. Thank you!