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Dawn's Over-Usage

dawn's over-usage Again, again I hear another use of the word dawn in a poem, in a phrase, in a conversation ... in my headache ... another sweet dawn, another morning dawn, ... another break of dawn, dawn's eyes peaking, another dawning dawn, dawn, dawn that sneak why, why, why please, I want to vomit with her overuse, already her smug little face i see every daybreak every morning please, no i'm not jeolous such rotten eggs to my eyes and ears dawn, dawn, dawn can life shed some good light put it this way Connie's going to have a cow soon it won't be pretty listen connie helps on the way Connie we hear you, we do trust us help is on the way we repeat we're sending your physch doctors right away okay, then again maybe we're not okay, rats it's just that everyone's in love with dawn, doc why the infatuation like i woke up to a new dawn, please people writing, like she's an animate object people speaking like she'd a god, doc that she ... oh, oh, will spring to life and open her arms like an angel, or celestial being please she's not, doc she nothing special she not the easter bunny, she's an overused phrase, doc point being how how often do you read about eve standing center stage getting fawned ,exposed not as much as dawn, doc that ... where did you go doc, doc, help ... what was that about blasphemy where did you go doc, yet. yet just look what I read Saturday's Wall Street Journal head lines vomit time Trump Starts A New Dawn Please, you please, find an answer to this riddle connie pachecho 1/24/17

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