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Dawn Rising

Dawn Rising

At break of dawn,
     we rise from our bed.
          Are we too late to see?

The morning light,
     Another sunrise.
          "Will you watch it with me?"

He takes my hand,
     Then he smiles and says,
          "Where would I rather be?"

Together we
     watch the sun's rebirth.
          Can love be born anew?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/26/2015 5:15:00 PM
Lovely sunrise thoughts and questions, Lin. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 5:21:00 PM
Hi, Sandra...thank you so very much. ~ Lin ~
Date: 10/26/2015 1:17:00 AM
You can't beat a good sunrise, with someone else. Lovely piece, Lin, well done. Viv
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Date: 10/26/2015 1:52:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Viv. It's nice to get a visit from you.
Date: 10/25/2015 5:25:00 PM
this is very nice. Congrats. I see you rhymed yours too!
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thanks. It's been a habit that I really am trying to break.. although in this one I really should've continued the rhyme in the last line.
Date: 10/25/2015 3:30:00 PM
this is charming Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, ma'am.
Date: 10/25/2015 1:25:00 PM
A lovely poem, congrats.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard. I enjoyed writing for your contest.
Date: 10/25/2015 12:27:00 PM
Lin a well deserved win!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Michael. How kind of you to acknowledge me. ;)
Date: 10/19/2015 10:43:00 AM
The sun rises when we hold the hand of the one we love, dear Lin! Wonderful, romantic writing! Very well done! A seven!
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Date: 10/19/2015 10:56:00 AM
I recall many romantic sun rises ~ grateful that we can hold on to good memories. You're very kind with your number...Thank you very much.