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Dating, Whose Dating

She came downstairs in the shortest dress her daddy had ever seen. She was 14, tanned, and had the tallest legs in the family, by a long shot, And now they were uncovered and she looked even taller. “I hope you have shorts on under that short skirt,” Her daddy admonished. The girl grinned, glad to get this kind of attention, then she laughed. Mommy laughed too, and reminded Daddy that he used to urge her to Wear shorter skirts when they were dating. “Dating? Who is dating?” Daddy asked, jumping out of the chair in fright. Mommy had definitely made things worse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/10/2018 3:43:00 AM
This piece had me smiling the entire time...like the 'story like' lines...kept me curious...Daddy and their little girls growing up...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2018 6:11:00 AM
Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Date: 5/9/2018 10:43:00 PM
Ha! Chickens came home to roost there for D.O.D. (Dear Old Dad). ~ Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2018 6:12:00 AM
Right! I have seen this so many times.
Date: 5/9/2018 11:20:00 AM
Very funny! From bad for daddy to worse!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2018 1:39:00 PM
Right! Thinking of my own sweet husband who nearly fainted when his 3 daughters were bringing the enemies home.
Date: 5/9/2018 7:31:00 AM
LOL. Charming poem.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you, Line. It came together very quickly as I was the Daddy-reaction to my granddaughters this weekend.

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