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Dark Horse, Mystic

Dark Horse In the thin space between the hours, where midnight is done but tomorrow not yet begun, a dark horse rides, trampling time as everything resets. Her ancient hooves tear yesterday to dust. Her furious nostrils inhale every wasted second, and whineys them out in fresh garlands of blossoming color and sound, flowering moments that wheel around the sun, putting every possibilty back in place, and the first second strikes! Image Me a Poem, contest 9-18-2017

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:09:00 AM
Very enchanting and ethereal, Jack - enjoyed this muchly! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:55:00 PM
Jack, I love this dreamy write, congratulations !
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jack!
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Date: 10/2/2017 9:30:00 PM
A beautiful and mystical write Jack with wonderful lines of imagery like your second line in the first verse - just beautiful poetic expression. An awesome write and good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 9/19/2017 2:28:00 PM
Very creative approach to the prompt, Jack! Janice
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/19/2017 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. Fingers crossed!
Date: 9/19/2017 7:15:00 AM
Love your creative take on that picture--this is a sure win!
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/19/2017 10:31:00 AM
I hope so! I would be fun! Thanks, Vijay.
Date: 9/18/2017 8:47:00 PM
Wonderful imagery , Jack, I can see the brown stallion running amongst the stars. Good luck in the contest Eve
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/18/2017 9:33:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!