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Dark Coat-Tails

Naked as the day of my birth, I lay upon the floor coverless and chill, eyes fluttering, closed, yet aware... inwardly I stare, counting chest rises, in despair. My fear of onward life is more than I can ignore. Outside, a fluttering of wings seeking to explore, the haunting howl of wolf, whose mating call taunts, beware, both harbingers of death; I grasp with each breath of air, sending scorching ripples through a shaking fearful core. Moonlight cloaks my sentient form, and heaven guards my plight. Covers tossed, comfort shorn, I search for ribald tales to return to me a bit of warmth and playful light. A hoot, a yip, a chirping melody, which prevails reminding me of the paths beyond the pale that invite, for I am just a dreamer tossed, on night's dark coat-tails. Date: 9/26/12 Contest: Dreams

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Date: 5/11/2013 5:31:00 PM
Debbie I enjoyed reading your winning poem this evening. Congratulation! Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie, enjoyed reading your poem. As usual your poems have deep beautiful sentences. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 2/26/2013 1:33:00 PM
There's so much dramatic imagery in this write. Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/25/2013 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your well deserved win. Connie
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Date: 2/25/2013 4:26:00 PM
Debbie ' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2013 7:03:00 AM
Great lines here, Debbie....masterful...congrats!
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:05:00 PM
Hola Debbie, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA
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Date: 9/30/2012 7:24:00 AM
I love it.
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Date: 9/26/2012 11:24:00 PM
This is really wonderful Debbie. Love the last line.
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Date: 9/26/2012 10:08:00 PM
"Moonlight cloaks my sentiment form and heaven guards my plight." Like, who writes like this...only a great poetic mind. Did you lay on the floor as the day of your birth? just askin!! One love. Joy Wells
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/27/2012 5:53:00 AM
hmm I meant the naked part was there NOW and at birth..good point Joy!

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