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Dancing Rain

. never will there be the music of your laughter--- except in the voice of spring, after a rainstorm... tapping a dance in pure joy ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' For Francine Robert's Contest: "Wow Me With 5 Lines"

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Date: 4/26/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Francine's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:40:00 AM
Just so sooo beautiful.this one has touched my heart.Congrats Carrie.Love,Gautami
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:11:00 AM
You are on a roll lately Carrie. I sure loved this gem.
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:48:00 PM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Carrie. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2011 7:22:00 PM
Sweet five lines Carrie. cngratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:46:00 PM
I knew this one would be on the list Carrie. ;) Congratulations on your win. Love Wilma
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:21:00 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the Wow Me contest Carrie, lovely tanka you've penned
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:10:00 AM
I had to peek in on this write of yours dear poet...your title lured me in for sure ! A well done Tanka Carrie, and a great entry for Francine's contest ! Have a great day Carrie....much love, james
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:28:00 AM
You certainly "wowed" me, Carrie! I can relate to the feelings of loss as well as the joy of dancing raindrops. Awesome! Sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:55:00 AM
What a lovely refreshing way to look at lost Carrie, real beauty you have here.. Love Wilma
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:56:00 PM
this has not been entered in the contest , please check and re-enter
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:42:00 PM
well you did a great job on this one. what would soupers do if all contest were canceled, think about that one. it seems like there is a lot of them going on, which is ok, poems are being written with new twist, but there is an overdose on them, just thought i would speak my mind no offense to anyone.
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:18:00 PM
YOu WOWED ME!
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:10:00 PM
Lovely feelings of the spring, carrie
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:34:00 PM
What a beautiful way of looking at spring rain! After this past winter, with all the snow we had, spring rain truly is refreshing! Best wishes in the contest! Ellen <3
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