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Dancing-Acrostic

Dance ballerina dance All the stations played it Nat King Cole was the star Couples smooched to the music In every club and bar Naughty things happened after dusk, Girls wed, babies all premature. Penned September 23 rd. 2013

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Date: 9/22/2013 3:43:00 PM
enjoyed this witty write - thanks, loved the contest : )
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2013 1:10:00 AM
Hi Jack thanks for your comment ..Seren
Date: 9/22/2013 1:02:00 PM
I like that song too my friend! I used to frequent the clubs when I was young, that was fun then! I don't do that anymore but I have memories of that time period, some great ones...although I have to admit, I really stink at dancing! But I did it anyway (and made a fool of myself, ha ha) this is a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2013 1:11:00 AM
I love the sound if N.K.C.....Seren
Date: 9/22/2013 7:10:00 AM
Awww loved it Seren... brought back such sweet memories! Also loved the touch of humour! Big big hugs, Jack xoxox
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2013 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Jack ...Seren
Date: 9/22/2013 1:58:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. enjoyed. Tfs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2013 1:12:00 AM
Hi Ravi ...thanks for stopping by ...Seren
Date: 9/22/2013 1:15:00 AM
Nice acrostic looks a winning poem, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2013 1:13:00 AM
Thank you Ram, we will see ..Seren

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